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    The Mu Story of Legend

    Soo ok waaaay back when i way alot more active, and wasnt occupied with as much real world things as i have going on right now i actualy started to write a story for my guild and how it all came together ( alil over dramatised tho cause heck its a story! XD)

    anywho i've shared it with a couple of my guild members before and they liked it so i thought about posting the first chapter of it here for you people to read. Now remember english is not my main language and so it will probably be ridden with spelling and grammar errors. JUST LOOK PAST THOSE! XD.

    now without further adoooo :P

    The Mu Story of Legend

    * removed by HentaiKing so it doesnt mess up the story line XD *



    I hope you guys like it, I know its short but while writing these i always imaged them in my head while comming up with the story so in my mind they play out like an anime episode, which are usualy pretty short so these are kinda like anime episode story boards.

    greetz

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    Fun story!! =)

    Looking forward to reading more hehe

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    haha nice

    but i feel like ive seen this somewhere o_O..... weirdness..

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    Rofl checking it out now i actualy noticed i messed up the order XD what you've read now is chapter 2 instead of chapter 1 darnit! XD Anywho imma post chapter 1. Also gonna post the Index of what i had written so far. If i ever feel like it i might write some more.

    Here it goes,

    The Mu Story of Legend

    Chapter 1: The Beginning of a new Era
    Chapter 2: The Journey Begins
    Chapter 3: Hey There Stranger
    Chapter 4: Friendly Faces in the Dark
    Chapter 5: Hidden in Doom and Darkness
    Chapter 6: Old Bones Rest Unwary

    The Mu Story of Legend

    Chapter #1 ( for reals this time XD )

    The Beginning of a New Era

    Waking up with A smile on her face, RikkU got out of her bed. Today was her birthday, today was the day her training would end,
    Today was the day she would be tested before setting out on her journey.
    She was so excited that she left home without breakfast. She ran through the village of Noria, All the villagers greeting her
    as she passed them by.
    She was wellknown throughout the entire village not only was she the daughter of the villagehead, she had
    also tied in the marksmantest with the Elven Warrior of Legend High Elf Esmeralda.
    In the distance RikkU could see master Eo waiting for her. He hated waiting and RikkU had already build up a reputation of arriving late.
    But not today, today she would show him that she was ready, today she would become a fullfledged warrior Elf worthy of the High Elves of the
    old Legend. Today she will set out on her journey to rid this world of the evil of kundun once more.

    Master Eo greeted RikkU the same way he always did, without showing any real emotion. He quickly went on to the task of today.
    "RikkU are you ready for the challenge that awaits you." "Yes Master Eo, Today i will complete my training so i can set out on my journey."
    "Very well then, Here is your bow and your arrow quiver, use them wisely remember what i taught you, one shot one kill." "Yes Master i will remember
    your teachings" she replied. "Very well then be on your way, Bring me the axe of a Goblin, the Fang of a forest monster and the Horn
    of an Angus, and you will have passed your test."

    Rikku set out into the dark forrest around Noria village, it was ridden with monsters she?d have to be carefull not to attract too much unwanted
    attention. Lately large groups of goblins had bin attempting raids near the village borders, something evil was at work.
    As a true elf RikkU silently made her way through the forest paths. There it was a lone goblin she would have to kill it to take its axe.
    RikkU Crouched down and alignt an arrow on her bow, she took aim, one shot one kill the words flashed through her mind, she held her breath to steady her aim.
    and RELEASE! The arrow left the bow with incredible speed, souring through the air, a splash of blood splattering against the trees around the goblin.
    Before it had even noticed RikkU it was already struck down by her arrow. She?d have to be quick now, The forest beast are drawn to the
    smell of blood. RikkU quickly picked up the goblins axe and made her way deeper into the dark forest.

    The woods were getting more dense, there were moving shadows all around RikkU, she had bin followed, The axe! the scent of the goblin was still on it.
    The noises were getting closer the shadows bigger, three no wait four, there were four enemies comming closer, one slightly bigger then
    the others. RikkU quickly dropt the Axe on the open space she was standing on and climbed the nearest tree. Three goblins came out of the shadows not long after
    RikkU had left the open space. Did they notice her?, did she get spotted?. It seems they havent found her possition, they seem to be more fixated on the axe.
    all three the goblins are examining the axe. It almost looks like they are debating. RikkU alligns 3 arrows on her bow, She takes aim, there is no other way
    if she doesnt kill these three she wont be able to continue her test. one shot one kill she holds her breath and the moment she releases her arrow, she is reminded
    about the fourth enemy she heard he?s not there! where did he go? She gets knocked out of the three the moment her arrows stike the three goblins.
    It seems they had an elite with em, Gracefully RikkU lands on her feet, angered by her own error she alligns another arrow, releasing without another thought.
    Striking the Goblin elite that had surpriced her up in the three.

    Quickly she Grabs the axe she took from the goblin before and makes for the creak to wash away its scent. Water clear as crystal streaming through the forest.
    RikkU washes the axe in the stream, "there that should no longer attract any unwanted predators". Her elf hearing had picked up the sound of
    something rushing through the woods at high speed. "A Forest monster, it has to be one of those". RikkU swiftly went after the sound.
    She was right it was a forest monster, they were known for rushing through the forest in search for prey. He may be fast but he should be no match for the speed
    of my arrow. In hot pursuit another arrow found its way to the body of rikku?s prey. Thats two down and one more to go to finish this exam.
    "This is gonna be easier then i thought".

    "now then the angusses they are said to live in the north east part of the forest" she said to herself. "It'll probably be faster if i take the route in the tree's"
    Like a true elf that had since her birth lived in the woods, RikkU made her way up and through the trees, jumping from branch to branch without even disturbing a single leaf.
    Swift yet silent, she truely was the next Hero. "there they are". Angusses are comparable to Minotaurs, they are a smaller variation of the breed.
    Usualy wielding two serpent shaped blades, they were not so mobile but their blows packed enough punch to take down an ancient oak tree.
    If RikkU was going to get take one down she'd have to do this with a single blow to the head, there had bin reports of angusses surviving quivers of arrows emptied into their
    musculair bodies. Eventho they are vile creatures their vigor was admireable. From the three she was in Rikku alignt an arrow on her bow. The angus in kill range.
    She took aim, Held her breath, released the arrow with all her might, The arrow soaring through the air gained an red aura around it.
    Piercing the angus through its skull. She did it, she had finished her test. Master Eo shall be proud of her. RikkU Took the horn of the angus, and starded making her way back
    though the forest, back to her village.

    A scream it was comming from the Village,"that voice, ITS GWEN", faster then the wind RikkU rushed towards the village. Grey clouds of smoke were comming from the village,
    it cant be the goblins they arent strong enough to do this she thought as she came closer to the village. Shadow Hunters a special elven unit intercepted RikkU before she reached
    the village."milady, the village its under attack, the forces of kundun have come to stop you from finishing your test. Your father has send us to protect you, you must stay away from
    the village for now if you were to fall the world would no longer have a secure future". "But father, and Gwen and all the others". "The village head will mak..."
    Without hessitation RikkU pushed away her guardians and made for the village. Its gates lying in ruines.

    "Those sounds!" "Crossbows" "Hunters" RikkU swiftly aligned three arrows on her bow while she made her way through the village, Shooting down every enemy that dared stand in her way.
    Finaly reaching ther where her house was suppost to be. Now it was nothing but rubble. Again she heard the same voice scream. !!, "Gwen!!"
    RikkU run towards the direction the scream came from. Towering before her there was a Enormous piece of rock. " no thats not a rock its a" "GOLEM!!!"
    The Monstrosity Turning around at the sound of RikkU's Voice. " It cant be, they have bin extinct since the sealing of Kundun 300 Years ago"

    "RikkU!!!, RUN!!!!" "Father is that you?" "Quickly Child get away before this blasted beast takes away your flame" "No Father i wont leave you"

    The Stone Golem making its way towards RikkU, Eventho they were slow their power was beyond any other forest creature, able to cause an earthquake simply by smashing on the ground.

    RikkU fired Arrow After arrow at the behemoth that didn't slow down at all by any shot she fired. The Last arrow in her quiver she alligned it but before she could release it.
    the golem was within reach, as slow as it was before it smacked rikku back into the rubble with but a single blow. The town shrine, the place where the Ancient Hero was remembered for her bravery.
    Having lost her bow and arrow RikkU looked for something to defend herself from the Golem which was still comming at her.
    A shiney point comming from below the rubble, as if she didnt knew any better RikkU reached below the rubble and took out Esmeralda?s bow which was kept in the shrine.
    The golem now once again within Smashing Range. No arrow to fire, All her effort and yet she was doomed, Her town on the brink of destruction, Her fathers flame already taken away, aswell as her sisters,
    Was this the sign that kundun would this time succeed in becoming the lord over all.

    "Fear not young One, there is still hope" "That Voice its.." "Its Esmeralda" "Your Flame will be extinguished but not today not now" "align your energy as you would an arrow"
    "If your heart is pure you will not die today"

    RikkU focused her energy, an arrow of mana formed between her fingers, and aligned on the bow, "Remember Young one, One Shot One Kill"

    Rikku's eyes opened, She released the arrow, Souring with purple aura the arrow penetrated the stone golem, with a bright flash the stone gollem shattered to thousands of small pieces.

    "very well young one, You show much talent, may your journey be one of great legend"

    With the fading of Esmeralda's voice so did her bow from Rikku's Hands. The threat to the village was over, but the cost had bin great.

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    Chapter #2

    The Journey Begins

    All the remaining elves of the village of Noria had gathered, Just a few hours after the invasion on their town, They all stood at the edge of
    their village before them lay the bodies of those that perished in battle. This Included Gwen, Rikku?s younger sister aswell as her father.
    Master Eo who had protected Elf Lala one of the village eldars was preaching the final words of prayers. He turned to RikkU, RikkU stept forward,
    And lid the bodies of their fallen in flames with the torch she was carrying.

    "May their spirits join the ancients and their flames be reborn" she said as the bodies caught flame.

    A tear falling down her cheek, as she thinks back to those unfaitfull events happening but hours ago. After having destroyed the golem, she had rushed
    to the body of her father, with his last breaths he had told her that he was glad to have bin the father of the new hero. And that she had no need to be sad
    he had lived for as long as he was allowed to and that it was now up to her to finish that which has bin tradition for all these era's.

    " RikkU" " RikkU"

    "ooh em yes Master?"

    The ceremony had ended a while now, Master Eo had come to RikkU.

    " I'm very sorry for your loss" he said, " your father was a great elf aswell as your sister."

    "Yes, yes they were" she replied.

    " The Shadow hunters had informed me that you had completed your exam, eventho you left the items behind, they took them along when they chased after you."
    " you do understand what this means right?"

    "yes... today is the day i will be leaving the village on my journey."

    " that is correct, eventho all these things have happend there is always a reason behind events such as these."
    " you will need to pack to start your journey"

    "Yes master i will"

    Having packed what was left of her belongings she set out to the west gate of town. At the gate both Master Eo and Elf Lala waited for her.

    "May these blessings protect you form the perils on your journey" Elf Lala said. Afterwhich she starded chanting.

    "Thank you and please watch over this village as my father used to." RikkU Replied after Lala was done with her chant.

    "Master, i shall follow your teachings, thank you for all the care, and please watch over this place."

    " we shall my dear, bow before you go take this with you, it once belonged to your mother. With this battle bow she had slain the fierce beasts on the icy lands of devias.
    This is your current destination, to get there you..."

    "I must cross the land of Lorencia"

    " Yes that is correct. Now please be carefull, if Kundun has gotten so bold as to attack our village he is sure to have even more plans ready to stop the heroes from sealing him."

    With a nod RikkU set out on the journey she had bin preparing for since birth. Of towards the gateway leading toward the lands of Lorencia.
    Following the sand path along the creak, Small beetles drinking from the water, Suddenly they starded growing.

    "This is..." "This is an evil aura, these.. these forest creatures they are getting corrupted." "The water it has to be the water"
    "The water of this creak it comes from the lands of Lorencia, Kundun's plague must be starting a great havoc there already aswell."

    Quickly RikkU Dispensed of the Newly Born evil beasts. And made her way to the Lorencia Gateway.
    The Giant stone gate, build by the ancients, so our people could travel from one part of the continent to the other so would could work together, to stop Kundun.
    Taking a deep breath RikkU Steps through the gate and finds herself on the other side of it. She has now entered the Lands of Lorencia, No turning back now.
    Navigation being one of the elves strong points, she starts walking towards the north west, the City Of lorencia should be located there.

    "Hmm Better be Carefull if Noria was already infected, then Lorencia might aswell be infected"

    Moments after the thought had crossed her mind she encounters something similair to a bovine, but its standing on two legs. its in some ways similair to the angusses,
    in the lands of noria but smaller. The animal seems to have noticed RikkU. Its breathing gets heavier, Its stare focused on our Young elf.
    Slowly RikkU reaches for her arrow quiver. The Animal Getting nervous as he watches her every movement. She lines up an arrow on her mother's bow.
    The Bull's nervousnes gets the better of it and it charges RikkU at full speed. Rikku's fingers release the arrow. The bull charging so quickly and so vigourusly, it doesnt
    even notice being hit. Barely able to escape being impaled by the bulls horns, rikku aligns another arrow and fires away at the beast. The arrow piercing its head. The beast turning
    to face rikku. She quickly grabs another arrow. But before she could even align it, the beast drops to its knees.

    "Pfeeww, These things are tough, but nothing i cant handle"

    RikkU Puts away her arrow and as she is about to continiu on her way she is halted by an Lorencian Guard.

    "Elf!, What is your bussiness here in lorencia."

    " I... I.. I am the chosen of the Elves. I am Here on my Journey"

    The guard Bursts in laughter.

    "PFFF ahahaha, you?, your the chosen. You could barely Handle one of the bulls from this place, and you are suppost to defeat Kundun?"

    "Go Home to your trees, dont waste your life so eas..."

    Before the guard could finish his sentence an arrow sours past his helmet. The guard Immediatly taking out his Berdiche.

    "Whats the big idea?!"

    " The Idea is, i just saved your life" RikkU points to the guard as she puts away her bow.

    The guard looking behind him he's face to face with a bull. Falling over backwards he notices the arrow piercing through the bovines head.

    "I.. I. I'm terribl..."

    "dont bother, just tell me if im on the right way to lorencia" Rikku said.

    The guard unable to bring out another word, nods and points into the right direction.

    "Thankies" Rikku went on her way towards the City of Lorencia with a smile on her face for the first time since this morning.

    In the Distance Many people were crossing a brigde, it were the bridges of lorencia, the city build to defend the Main part of the Continent.
    There were people on horses, some on Uneria's which were very rare. others walk with big carts. RikkU went among the mass of people entering the city.

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    I was suspecting, Short Stories.

    Read half way threw Chapter one and interesting details towards the story. Yes a few punctuations and stuff missing but overall keep up the great work HK.

    Also, Welcome Back

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    Ooh im not back XD im just passing trough, hangin around and pervin up the place a bit.

    Still too busy to actualy get commited to ze game.

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    nice to read these :P still feel ive read them before though, for some reason >_<......
    maybe Esmeralda told me once....dunno....

    niceness nonetheless !

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    It is very long ... I got lazy to read Jjajaja

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    Quote Originally Posted by NexusNemesis View Post
    nice to read these :P still feel ive read them before though, for some reason >_<......
    maybe Esmeralda told me once....dunno....

    niceness nonetheless !
    Hmm i think i send a couple of chapters to her when i was writing them. Here?s the next chapter btw :P

    Chapter #3

    Hey There Stranger

    Among the mass of people, RikkU Entered the big City of Lorencia, It was clear that this was a Market City, she could hear merchants
    shouting from every direction, about all the goods they had for sale. Tempted to look at some of the shops, RikkU followed the Smell
    of something deliciously sweet. A Small boy was standing near a cart. It was a merchant?s cart. The kid, quickly grabbed a few apples
    from the cart and made of through the mass of people. The Merchant shouting: "THIEF!, Get Back here you little RAT!!!"
    As she saw it happening RikkU quickly went after the little kid. He saw him run into an little Alley, She ran after him and turned into
    the alley and BAM!!!
    With a smack RikkU Fell to the floor, Rubbing her Head she looked around to see what she bumped into. " AAAUW Hey missy cant you watch where
    you're going."
    "I'm sorry i.. i.. ran after someone and i thought he went in here."
    " Well you should get your eyes checked cause if you look closely you'd see im the only one here"
    "i.. i. um i'll be going then."
    " yea whatever"
    RikkU got up and started walking back out the alley. She could hear the voice of the man she had just bumped into talking to someone.
    " So did you get them?"
    " Yea ofcourse i got them, that old coot of a merchant wont catch me"
    " HAHA thats the way kid now hand me one"
    RikkU having overheard what had bin said with her elvish hearing. Walks back into the alley.
    "So your the one whose making this kid steal huh?"
    " Yea what of it?" the man replied.
    " Bugger of lady" the kid said. Throwing one of the apples he stole at RikkU.
    Before the kid even noticed it RikkU had taken her bow and shot the apple out of the air.
    " You got some nice skill there." the man said.
    " I suggest you stop with the bad influence on that kid, or else he might turn into some real scumbag such as yourself"
    RikkU put away her bow and walked out of the alley back to the vendor street.
    "She was weird right sparky" the kid said.
    " na not weird, interesting is more like it."
    After her first encounter with the guards of lorencia she wasnt so sure she should ask them for information after their rude behavior.
    Luckly there was an information broker right on the corner. Just as she was about to pay the broker to tell her about Lumen, an elf that had
    come to the city of lorencia to find out more information about Kundun. The man RikkU met in the alley interupts.
    " You shouldn't ask this guy anything he's a scammer."
    " are you saying i should ask you then?" RikkU Replied.
    " Well if you want any information about Lorencia then yea, Lets say i'll tell you what you want to know to apologize for my behaviour before?"
    " Oke then, do you happen to know where i can find lumen?"
    "LUMEN?!"
    "yes Lumen."
    " The Elf Lumen?"
    "....... yes the elf lumen, you dont know her do you?"
    "Ofcourse i know her."
    " Can you take me to her then?"
    " errr i guess i could altho that would probably get me into trouble"
    "What was that?"
    "no nothing lets go follow me eheheh."
    RikkU Followed the Man towards the Lorencia City Tavern. Arriving at the bar RikkU Spots Lumen behind the bar and runs towards her.
    "LUMEN!!"
    "That voice is that... RIKKU!!" " Oh my you've grown so much, is it no already?"
    "Yes im here on my journey"
    "How did you find me "
    "Well when i was about to ask an information broker some man i bumped into before stopped me and saved me from getting scammed."
    "where is he? i'd like to thank him" Lumen said.
    " hey Mister come over here please "
    The man walks up to the bar, ducking as soon as he's there to avoid a mug getting thrown at him.
    "SPARKY!!!, i told you never to show your face here again."
    " wait wait hold on this man saved me from being scammed and let me to you lumen."
    " And he's the lowest piece of scum there is, he's bin making passes at me since the day i got in this town." Lumen replied.
    " HOLD ON, i just did a friend of you a favour, doesnt that errm make you forgive me atleast a little bit"
    " Come on Lumen he doesnt seem to be that bad of a guy, i mean he did take me to you while he could of just tried to scam me."
    "I Guess your right RikkU." "But dont think this gets you in the clear sparky."
    "eheheh"
    RikkU Tells Lumen the entire story of what happend at their home town of Noria. Lumen Tells RikkU that she has heard that the ancient heroes,
    all went to devias to test their abillities. Having learned this RikkU is now determined to get to Devias to continiu with her journey.
    She says farewell to Lumen and is On her way. Just outside of the Bar Sparky is waiting for RikkU.
    "So you'll be going to Devias now then i guess?"
    " yea thats the place the ancient heroes went to so it is part of my journey"
    " You Know Lumen might have not told you but, the Ancients have visited a place here near Lorencia Aswell."
    " Where? What Place?"
    " If you want i can take you there." sparky said.
    " Ok lets go!"
    " On to the North East gate it is then."
    RikkU And Sparky walked outside of the North East gate on to the location the where the ancients had supposetly visited.
    " Whats this place were going to called?" rikku asked.
    " Around here the place has bin called Dungeon, they say kundun used to trap and torture those who opposed him there."
    " hmm ok, and the ancients have gotten rid of the plague that soiled the place?"
    " I guess they did" sparky replied
    "So why do they call you sparky?" RikkU Asked.
    " Why? ahahah here i'll show you, You see that skeleton there?"
    "yea i see it, whats with it?"
    "Watch and be amazed."
    Sparky starded chanting a spell while making hand motions, then all of a sudden out of the tips of his fingers lighting ran towards the skeleton.
    " WoW "
    " Epic right?" Sparky Says with a big smile
    "errm no i ment wow even with all that lightning you missed."
    " What?! no way i dont miss"
    The skeleton having noticed the giant flash of lightning shooting past it, now running towards RikkU and Sparky. Quickly RikkU grabs her bow and
    shoots the charging skeleton and stops it in its tracks.
    "so how far is it till this "dungeon"?"
    " Were almost there." Sparky says kind of emberrassed.
    A little Walk further Rikku and Sparky are standing face to face with a Giant Snake Faced Gate.
    " This is it." Says sparky.
    They enter the dungeon, lighting a torch they make there way into the darkness.

 

 

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